Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Due to
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technological progress, the influence of intelligent machines starts playing a highly important part in our daily life. Some
people
assert, that robots would help us to do routine
work
and would make
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life better,
whereas
many others assume that
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AI
apears
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appears
in the light of potential danger for
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humanity. Let's discuss
this
interesting topic from different perspectives. On the one hand,
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of the technology of
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AI seems rather good for
people
.
For example
,
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of the androids can allow
people
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more interesting
occupation
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instead
of monotonic and boring
work
.
Furthermore
, these
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machines
could increase the quality of
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life, for
instanse
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instance
, make
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coffee
for you or even deliver a package.
On the other hand
,
this
issue may
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a bad effect. The first thing that stands out in my mind is the lack of vacant positions for
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middle education. Indeed, if
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learnt how to sort out letters in a post office, what would happen to the individual who used to assume
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work
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job? Employers
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chose the machine
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to the person, because the robot does not want to be
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,
moreover
, it does not need a vacation
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either
then
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I would like to say, that humanity should stay modern and take part in technological progress.
However
,
people
should not
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delegate
all hard
work
to the Al, we should not forget how to
work
by ourselves, because
this
is a significant part of being a human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • innovation
  • operational efficiency
  • precision
  • accuracy
  • hazardous
  • technological advancement
  • displacement
  • skill gap
  • accountability
  • privacy
  • economic inequality
  • initial investment
  • manual labor
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • marginal error
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