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Cities around the world are continuing to expand as people leave the countryside. Some people prefer to live in the city, while others like to live in the countryside. discuss both views.

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Nowadays many masses move in urban cities.
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 some individual think that living in big cities is getting harder
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 other thinks that living is easy.
This
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To begin
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 with, there are some drawbacks to living in a big
city
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, in the modern era houses are so costly and another additional charge will
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 payed from our pocket.
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, in Gujarat five years ago people buy a new home for 10 to 20 lacs.
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 at
this
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 time
this
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 price is increased 3X.
As a result
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, humans cannot afford to live In megacities. Another disadvantage is the increasing pollution. Because of the large number of vehicles. They exhale the carbon dioxide in the air.
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, there are many breathing problems
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 as asthma and lung cancer.
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, there are several benefits to living in an urbanized
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. There is no doubt that the
city
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 improves your
life
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. You can modify your lifestyle
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city
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. If you are young you can move to the
city
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 because it can be easier to grow
life
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.
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, you can enjoy your
life
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 more. There are many entertainment things like clubs, theatre, gaming and many more.
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 in the
city
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, the transport facility is good you don’t have difficulty finding it.
To sum up
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, I have believed there are many cons to living in a mega
city
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 it is very beneficial for the individual. Because you can improve your
life
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 and growth in big cities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolitan areas
  • economic opportunities
  • career advancement
  • healthcare facilities
  • cultural diversity
  • countryside
  • tranquil environment
  • cost of living
  • close-knit communities
  • rural areas
  • housing affordability
  • social amenities
  • employment prospects
  • cultural vibrancy
  • hustle and bustle
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