Many things that were used to be done at homes by hands are now being done by machines does this advantages or disadvantages

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In today's
times
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people
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prefer to do
thier
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their
work
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by
machines
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rather than doing it by themselves.In my opinion, even if technology comes with more advantages,it
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damage to
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people
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. To commence with , the main advantage associated with
machines
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is that it is
cost effective
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.
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to say that,once the machine is operated ,only
maintenence
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maintenance
charges have to be paid and
work
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is done with little cost. Another benefit of technical gadgets is that it saves energy. Tasks which
requires
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long hours of hard
work
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can be easily done within few
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with less
efforts
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.
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, doing
task
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with gadgets can be beneficial in terms of speed.To be more clear, because of the
machines
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any
work
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can be done within some
time
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only which saves
time
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.
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,washing
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wash clothes in nearly an hour but the if the same task
done
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with hands,
take
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several hours to complete.
On the other hand
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,
morden
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modern
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technological
machines
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consumes
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lot
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of
electricity
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. Since all the
equipments
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equipment
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run on
electricity
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,more
electricity
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needs to be produced which can be costly
on
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government's
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the government's
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pocket.
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,
due to
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morden
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modern
day
equipments
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equipment
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,
number
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a number
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of
persons
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person
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job
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jobs
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is put in danger.
people
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suffers
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to get employment and face problems in fulfilling daily necessity.
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,because of the use of mobile phones,
people
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working as postman lost their jobs,as
people
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use cell phones to communicate.
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,
although
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advantages like less cost,energy and
time
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comes
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come
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with using
machines
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,
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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of more
electricity
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and employment can affect badly to the government and citizens.
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