The line graph and the bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature in one region over one year

The line graph and the bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature in one region over one year
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The line and bar charts present the average
rainfall
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and
temperature
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per month for one year for the
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, the highest
temperature
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records were reported in Mar and October. Meanwhile, the lowest
temperature
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showed in July.
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,the highest ratio of
rainfall
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was encountered in April
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the lowest rate of
rainfall
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was in July. In terms of
temperature
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, in Jan started at just under 22 and
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rose until reaching a peak of approximately 24.5 in Mar before declining to about 20 in Jul. Afterwards, it significantly climbed until reached a peak of roughly 23.5 in Oct. Afterwards, there was a considerable fall to nearly 21.5 in the
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month of the year. In terms of
rainfall
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, there was a little fluctuation in the first two months, in Jan started at close to 20 millimetres and
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slightly decline before climbing to roughly 100 in Mar and
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reaching a peak of more than 250 in April. After that, there was a considerable decrease until reaching less than 10 in Jul. There was a small increase in August and September and
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fairly rosed until close to 150 in Oct and Nov. In the
last
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month, there was a large decline to about 50.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, temperature with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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