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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, A learning foreign
language
 is a kind of trend to sell yourself and enhance your portfolio in your professional career. Educated societies believe that learning a foreign
language
 is more beneficial to
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 align with foreign business and plan to settle down with specific that country.
However
, there could be other aspects too for self-growth
as well as
 making a career relevant to
this
 field. There are serval reasons related to learning a foreign
language
.
Firstly
, people learning
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different foreign
language
 need
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 for that specific country as they have strong intend work or do business with the clients who fill comfortable dealing
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them with
.
For instance
, In some provinces of Canada like Quebec, employers strongly prefer candidates who have French
language
 fluency to work.
Secondly
, beginner and intermediate-level knowledge
helps
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 to communicate with native people who do not proficient to speak in English and interact with them on day to day basis.
Finally
, the key aspect is
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immigration purpose for the specific countries which set their own
language
 criteria to fulfil scores or bands.
On the other hand
,
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 are
also
 some thoughts to get foreign
language
 expertise.
To begin
 with get jobs as a translator in Banks or any Multinational companies which belong to Germany, Japan, China and so on to communicate with them fluently.
In addition
, the business perspective
to
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 open a foreign
language
 coaching centre to learn academic students who are willing to study abroad.
Furthermore
, elementary schools are
also
 taking the initiative to learn at least one foreign
language
 as an extra curriculum activity. To put it in a nutshell, It is true that the importance of learning a foreign
language
 has no limit and is specific for those who are dealing with native people in terms of work, and travel
whereas
also
 boosts your confidence to open the door to loads of opportunities for potential growth within the home country.
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