the charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age group and the amount of support they received from the employers.
The given charts demonstrate the data of the
students
who come under different age
groups, based on their reasons behind gaining knowledge
. It also
briefs about the help that they have got
from working professionals.
Replace the word
gotten
To begin
with, learners under the age
of 26 preferred education for a better career
, and only 10% of them were interested in gaining knowledge
. Whereas
, 70% of individuals over 49 were actually gaining knowledge
for the interest as compared to career
. Moreover
, students
belong
to the Wrong verb form
belonging
age
group of 26 to 49, moderately reduced gaining knowledge
for their career
. On the other hand
, more than 60% of the youth under 26 got support from working professionals, but only 32% of the people under 30
-39 range received financial help from employers.
Correct article usage
the 30
Overall
, students
under the 40-49 age
group equally pursued knowledge
for their career
as well as
for interest ,and there was a significant fall in the percentage of employers to
the Change preposition
apply
students
comes under the age
of 26 to 39.Submitted by gsmultani506 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, age, knowledge, career with synonyms.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!