write a short paragraph(70-80 words)about one type of environmental pollutions in your living place.

My suburb where I live has been polluted by
air
infection.
Air
abuse may be caused the lives of people with respiratory illnesses.
To begin
with,people who live near the factory can be lung cancer.More than that,atmosphere pollution affects sightseeing and traffic jams.
For example
,as researched in 2005 in the UK, traffic jams as usually because of breeze infection from vehicles' smoke.Not only are humans influenced by
air
pollution, but animals
also
do too.To illustrate birds in America have died a lot because of the smoke waste from the sugar factories.To solve the problem,nowadays the government in my town tell residents to .,
Also
people aim to reduce their carbon footprint by using our less so that they put down their use of fossil fuels.
Besides
each family can reduce
air
pollution by avoiding burning our household because garbage is dangerous to our health and our environment. contact your county about arranging for trash hauling services.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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