The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
The presented line graph provides data about how many books were read, in a public library, by, both,
men
and women at Burnaby during a 4-year time span, from 2011 to 2014.
Overall
,
men
have a very steep-growing trend that ends with them
finally
leading the rank in 2014,
whereas
females slow down to lose first place. In the beginning, during the first two years, women read more than
men
did. They devoured 2000 books more than their male counterpart.
Then
, in 2013, the number of titles read was equal for both sexes, they matched at 10000.
Furthermore
, a descending tendency that started in 2013 resulted in the surpassing by
men
, that, with a total of 14000 books, were the biggest readers in 2014.
To conclude
, in the
last
year, if women had not experienced a drop of nearly 3000 titles, they would not have lost the top spot in the ranking.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library
  • gender
  • reading habits
  • compare
  • significantly
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • consistent
  • fluctuate
  • period
  • summarise
  • graph
  • public library
  • books read
  • Burnaby Public Library
  • 2011 to 2014
  • male
  • female
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