The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
This
line chart depicts the number
of books
read by males and females at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.It is clear from the graph that the highest number
of books
read is 14000 by men and the least number
was 3000 also
by men in 2011.
According to
what is shown, the figure for males read books
increased slightly until reached 4000 in 2012 then
increased sharply to 14000 in 2014 while
the number
of books
read by women began with 5000 approximately in 2011 and then
climbed gradually to 10000 in 2013 before witnessed sharp decline after that which is continue decreased to the next year until reached 5000 in 2014.
To sum up
, in recent years there are an increase in the number
of books
read by men while
women show a decreasing behaviour in the number
of books
they read.Submitted by sad44447 on
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