All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both adults and children. What are the reasons for the rise in obesity? How could it be solved?

Nowadays,
obesity
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has become a growing global issue. Being overweight does not merely damage adults’ well-being, but children’s as well. In many cases, a high-calorie diet is the cause of
obesity
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and most modern citizens have been exposed and encouraged to one. The essay will discuss the main three reasons for
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problem
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and provide some possible solutions.
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it is clear that
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junk
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has gained more popularity in
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society. With the intention for a bigger profit,
food
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businesses overwhelm consumers, both adults and children, with attractive advertisements in every media possible.
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, KFC in Australia promotes their deep-fried chicken on every social media,
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billboards on the highways, tempting consumers to order their meal. To tackle
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issue, I suggest the government limit
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exposure to these unhealthy products
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promoting some healthier alternatives. To do so, it may help each individual to make more educated choices in
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consumption. Another
problem
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is that the rising number of low-income households cannot afford healthy
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. Under the influence of
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declining economy, people turn to junk
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that contains higher calories
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a lower price to cut the cost of living.
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, the price of some fruit and vegetables in Australia increased in the
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couple
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. One avocado is often priced as much as a large pack of chips. A solution to
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phenomenon is the authority to raise the taxes for unhealthy
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products and use the fund to support low-income individuals, which can, hopefully, allow them to be able to afford healthier choices. The third cause of
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problem
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is the lack of healthy
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choices at school. For many students, they fail to obtain proper nutrition from their school lunches. To give an example, most schools in the U.S.A only provide high-calorie
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such
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as pizza and french fries for their students. In order to solve
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problem
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, the government must monitor and regulate education institutes to offer at least one healthy option
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reducing the unhealthy ones.
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, the next generation is forced to take on an unhealthy eating
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that will later develop into health issues like
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.
To sum up
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, the inclining trend of
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in the world is
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the rising consumption of junk
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, the high cost of healthy alternatives and the high-calorie school lunch for children.
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is a serious
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, unless the government steps in and improves the situation, more people including children will suffer severe diseases from being overweight.

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