The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates several steps of how the production of bricks for construction is carried out in the factory.
It is clear that
there are 8 main stages in Linking Words
this
process, beginning with getting clay from the underground and ending with the resulting products being delivered by trucks.
As can be seen, during the first stage, clay is dug up by a digger and taken to the factory. Here, it is placed on a metal grid to be filtered and Linking Words
then
transferred to the next step by a roller. After adding water Linking Words
together with
sand, the mixture is moulded by the moulds or put into a wire cutter in order to form the shape of the bricks. Linking Words
Next,
those undergo a drying process in the oven for up to 2 days.
Once dried, bricks are baked in the kiln twice. The first time is under a moderate temperature of 200-980 degrees Celsius and the second time is higher, 870-1300 degrees. Linking Words
Subsequently
, those are cooled in the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Linking Words
Finally
, the finished products are packaged and transported to different building projects by lorries.Linking Words
Submitted by danphamngocha on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼