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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbook has become obsolete. Therefore, university should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion on this.

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, me as more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. From my viewpoint, the university should replace traditional books with digital
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 because it has more advantages than disadvantages. My opinion is given in below
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digital
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 almost every
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 have been online. There are so many
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 as it can be studied from any
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 can read any
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where
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 he like to do.
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,
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digital
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 too. The data
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 tablets can
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,
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 are eco-friendly. If a person wants to
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online than
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in notebooks
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 setting in another country but want to learn from another country
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internet
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become
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 own
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country. Students should accept
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To conclude
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, both traditional and
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 are good but, in my
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 a university should use more
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 than traditional books. From the above, information
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 digital
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 are more beneficial than traditional. As a nation is growing fast with digital the university should apply for online data.
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