Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problem does this cause? What are the solutions?

Undoubtedly, we can say that older individuals are struggling with

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jobs,

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they were used to

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at.

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, youngsters are now competing with their

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in similar areas as elders. It seems to me that,

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gap and technological development could be

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of

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phenomenon.

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has

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enabled us with a clear perspective

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path. And so, not only with

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point of view to consider in youth but

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various options in every field.

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,

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enhancement would create employment

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for elders, but at a different point

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corporations

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would still prefer experienced employees. Rather than, freshers or

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,

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development may create

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for older people in

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the different

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working

field

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fields

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.

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, tech companies will either pursue with latest technological intelligence in freshers or

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workers, no one knows.

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switching their work ethics, which would lead them to change significant of old staff members into

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.

On the other hand

, if elder experienced staff members could give more contribution, in compare to young youth.

Then

,

this

problem could turn into assets as a solution for them.

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, there are other industries, which are still taking their reliance on older employees, even though hiring new workers. Whether, years of family

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or bonding with community members in

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, are plus

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for them.

In addition

, several industries and

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corporations

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are paying high salaries to old

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, but they don’t want to invest

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training expenses

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new comers

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. To illustrate

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, young youth

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in

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hunt

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the hunt

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to

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better

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,

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so they could

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leave their current work environment in order for better options. Because of

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fundamentally many would keep their older workmates. In conclusion,

due to

many circumstances in work ethic and experience,

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is why employment for elderly aged people is still safer to consider. In my opinion, age

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between two individuals could not create

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impact in job industries, but

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even younger people will have to retire someday.