IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3

Test and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Write on this topic →
Introduction
Today
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
life was
totatley
Correct your spelling
totally
 different from the past ,
actually
Add a comma
,actually
show examples
 the style of study has
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
Add an article
a
show examples
change
Change the verb form
changing
changed
show examples
 in
every thing
Correct your spelling
everything
show examples
 starting
of
Change preposition
with
show examples
curriculum
Correct article usage
the curriculum
show examples
 to measuring Methods that lead to
think
Change the verb form
thinking
show examples
 some
time
Use synonyms
 testing is not only the way to judge students understanding. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Add a comma
,essay
show examples
 I will explore both
viwes
Correct your spelling
views
.
Body paragraph 1
Many individuals now
day's
Change noun form
day
show examples
more
beleive
Correct your spelling
believe
 with the
shifted
Replace the word
shift
show examples
 and development in every
trean
Correct your spelling
train
 of life 'especially education which is play
vital
Add an article
a vital
show examples
 role in
Correct article usage
the strucuter
show examples
strucuter
Correct your spelling
structure
 of
country
Correct article usage
the country
show examples
 society and economic .that lead us to be more
caerful
Correct your spelling
careful
 with
Correct article usage
the aquailty
show examples
aquailty
Correct your spelling
quality
a quality
 of
schools
Fix the agreement mistake
school
show examples
 study ,
However
Linking Words
 many
population
Change to a plural noun
populations
show examples
reckone
Correct your spelling
reckoned
reckon
 the
examitions
Correct your spelling
examinations
examination
 is not
measuer
Correct your spelling
measure
 for the
knowelge
Correct your spelling
knowledge
 and
understnding
Correct your spelling
understanding
 of information ,for two
resones
Correct your spelling
reasons
 one of them the tests
sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
show examples
 doing in
bad
Add an article
a bad
show examples
time
Use synonyms
 for pipul's condition.
Linking Words
furthermore
Add a comma
,furthermore
show examples
 many of
Correct article usage
the examition
show examples
examition
Correct your spelling
examination
 are in
viusal
Correct your spelling
visual
vital
part
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
show examples
 for memorizing only
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
make misremembering and
confused
Replace the word
confusion
show examples
.
Body paragraph 2
on
other
Correct article usage
the other
show examples
hands
Fix the agreement mistake
hand
show examples
 'many
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
imagen
Correct your spelling
imagine
show examples
 the
teset
Correct your spelling
test
 will be a good
Methods
Fix the agreement mistake
Method
show examples
 to
have
Wrong verb form
having
show examples
 exactuly
ruselts
Correct your spelling
results
while
Linking Words
 examations .aditional it is
organized
Correct article usage
an organized
show examples
 step to judging and
cosy
Correct article usage
a cosy
show examples
 way for teachers .
Conclusion
In conclusion '
I 'm firmly agree
Change the verb form
I firmly agree
show examples
 with the
benfits
Correct your spelling
benefits
 of a
varid
Correct your spelling
variety
 of
examations
Correct your spelling
examinations
 to
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
some
Correct quantifier usage
apply
show examples
time
Use synonyms
 in
papapers
Correct your spelling
papers
 and other
Use synonyms
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
 practical to take the
opporunites
Correct your spelling
opportunity
opportunities
 for all
level
Fix the agreement mistake
levels
show examples
 of students
Fix the infinitive
to
show examples
learn more about the
experince
Correct your spelling
experience
experiences
 that will follow it by different skills that they
are know
Change the verb form
know
show examples
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: