increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people think that higher costs of

petrol

are the optimal solution for

traffic

jams and

pollution

issues. I disagree with

this

because countries will continue

in

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consuming

petrol

regardless of the high prices.

Instead

, developing good

quality

transportation

lowers

traffic

, and utilizing sustainable

sources

as a replacement

of

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petrol

to decrease

pollution

. Increasing the cost of

petrol

to decrease

traffic

and

pollution

is not the best idea.

This

is because nations will continue using

petrol

.

In other words

, money is not an issue for countries relying on

petrol

.

For example

, Russia relies on

petrol

and imports almost 20% of the

overall

petrol

in the world.

However

, other

measurements

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can be done to overcome

traffic

and

pollution

. As for the effective solutions,

Firstly

,

traffic

can be significantly lowered with a good

quality

transportation

system. Variable

transportation

such

as the bus, train, and subway. people will use these more often when they are of good

quality

.

In other words

, the inside of a bus is clean and tidy, smooth checking in and out of a train, and the punctuality of arrival times.

For instance

, Saudi Arabia invested in a project to construct a fast tram in the capital city, Riyadh

,

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and decreased

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road congestion by 30% in the first year of opening.

Secondly

, using sustainable

sources

is a good replacement for

petrol

to lower

pollution

. These resources include solar, wind, and hydro

sources

. These

sources

are ideal because it does not require the burning of fuels and produce zero emissions in the environment. As an example, NEOM city in Saudi Arabia is aiming towards providing an environment without

pollution

, and

this

is done by using solar as the main source of power. In conclusion, I disagree with increasing the cost of

petrol

as a method to lower

traffic

and

pollution

.

However

,

traffic

on roads is decreased by investing in a good

quality

transportation

system, and

pollution

is decreased by using sustainable power

sources

.