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The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the independent films released in 2012 including different categories including the
genre
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,
number
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 of
releases
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 per
genre
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, the
ratio
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 of each
genre
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 of all
releases
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, and the
ratio
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 of
income
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 from
ticket
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sales
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.
Overall
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,both drama and documentary had the highest
number
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 of
releases
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 in the UK.
However
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,Comedy accounted for the highest
income
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 from
ticket
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sales
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 and
then
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 horror presented the second most popular
genre
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 as it recorded the second highest percentage of
income
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 from
ticket
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sales
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. In terms of the
number
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 of
releases
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, drama and documentaries gained the highest
number
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 with almost more than a fifth of the total
number
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 of
releases
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 for each type. Comedy reported the second-highest
number
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 of
releases
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 with a proportion of approximately 18%. Horror and Thriller accounted for almost a similar
number
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 of
releases
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. All other types of films recorded less than 10
releases
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 including Crime, action,Romance,Bioic, and other genres, reporting only one-fifth of the total
ratio
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 of
releases
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. In terms of
income
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 from
ticket
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sales
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, comedy gained the highest percentage of
sales
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 with nearly half. Horror occupied the second highest proportion of
sales
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 with almost a fifth of the total
sales
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. Romance presented the lowest
ratio
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 of
sales
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 with less than 1 %. Even though, Biopic reported only one release, it gained almost one in ten of the total
sales
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.
Likewise
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, 35 drama
releases
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 gained only less than one in ten of the total
sales
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.
Moreover
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,35 documentary films reported only under 5% of the total
sales
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Vocabulary: Replace the words genre, number, releases, ratio, income, ticket, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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