As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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role in our life and

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used more and more in education

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study can be possible without

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teachers which have so many benefits

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people who are living in

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people can study from any

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, during the pandemic

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people can easily able to study from home. It is low in cost compared to the school education. Online

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community to get data. A man from one state to another state can get the information fast.

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good.

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groups are prefacing to online classes many teachers are employed. A vibe is different in the online class and classroom.

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a child setting in online classes a teacher can focus very limited.

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will be used. If there will be unemployment poor arise

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poorly will increase which is not good for a country. For

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development online teaching is good for a country. In conclusion,

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online and classroom information is

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different. Online teaching

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more benefits than the school class.

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government

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more advantages

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Your opinion

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to a friend about an item you borrowed last week, that accidentally got damaged. In your letter – Describe the item. – What was the damage? – What do you intend to do to rectify the problem?

Organised tours to remote communities and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment? To what extent do you agree or disagree?