In modern society traditional food is being replaced by fast food. This trend has a negative impact on both individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The increase in

fast

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food

market in recent times is undeniable.

This

is unfortunately at the expense of more traditional and healthier foods.

This

trend has affected both the

indiviuduals

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individuals

individual

and society's

life style

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and

health

. I totally agree that

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this

impact is predominantly negative. There are some marginal benefits of having fast

food

. The biggest advantage is that fast

food

saves the average person a lot of time which can be spent

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more useful activities. Saving time is quite an attractive proposition to the general population, which is why there has been an increasing trend in the frequency of purchasing meals from fast

food

restaurants.

For example

, people would prefer to go to a drive-thru on their lunch breaks as opposed to going home and cooking a meal.

However

,

due to

their demand and popularity, buying meals from fast

food

chains is becoming

extortionatly

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extortionately

extortionate

expensive, adding to the current economic difficulties. Fast

food

chains have had a serious impact on

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health

. There are large amounts of sugar and trans fats present in nearly all fast foods.

Therefore

, the majority of individuals who consume fast

food

develop

health

issues which become more apparent as they get older.

For example

, a person may develop diabetes from consuming high levels of sugar on a regular basis.

Additionally

,

this

increases the risk of cardiovascular issues,

as well as

obesity and increased cholesterol levels.

This

is why it is reducing the quality of life certainly and

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of life probably of many people as time goes on. In conclusion, fast-

food

chain

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chains

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have had a

deterimental

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detrimental

effect on our

health

. In my opinion, there needs to be better regulation on which ingredients are used,

as well as

the level of sugar and trans fats.

Otherwise

, the individuals

as well as

the society will continue to suffer.