The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the average residential
water
utilization in litres in six Australian cities in the recent year,
while
the pie chart describes the shares of Australian
water
at the same time. It is obvious, that
Perth’
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inhabitants expended the most
water
(300 kilolitres per property) and,
in contrast
, Canberra the least (approximately 140 kilolitres).
Water
use in Sydney, Melbourne, Adelaide and Brisbane ranged somewhere
in
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between
from
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150 to 250 kilolitres. The tallest fraction of
water
was spent on agriculture (67%),
whereas
mining consumed the smallest proportion (2%). The remaining
water
was needed for other industries and manufacturing (4% respectively), electricity and gas supply
as well as
water
supply, sewage and drainage (7% respectively), and households at
last
(9%). In conclusion, the amount of
water
utilized
last
year was significantly higher in Perth, Adelaide and Brisbane
as
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in Melbourne and Canberra.
Furthermore
, Farming and domestication accounted for
two thirds
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of the consumed
water
.
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