Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include -Why you bought it -What you liked and disliked about it -Suggestions for improvement

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John Felliche, I am writing

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letter to share my reviews on the recent edition of the 'The Revolution of AI' that I purchased on Amazon. Being passionate about technology, I always seek out

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reading material to stay updated with the latest news and new technological inventions and enhancements. The magazine's content was truly exceptional, providing valuable insights into the world of Artificial Intelligence. What particularly impressed me was the use of high-definition pictures throughout the publication.

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, I find the interactive content to be lacking, which affected my

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experience. I would suggest introducing a section with quizzes and games related to AI, which would greatly enhance readers' engagement and make the magazine more enjoyable. I hope you consider

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future editions. Yours faithfully, SS

Submitted by Sneha s on Sat Jul 15 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

135 words

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Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include -Why you bought it -What you liked and disliked about it -Suggestions for improvement

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today many children and teenagers are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons to explain why many young people are obese and give some solutions to fix the problem.

"You recently had a problem with a product you bought from a store. Write a letter to the store manager to explain the issue. In your letter, you should: 1.Describe the problem with the product. 2.Explain how you would like the problem to be resolved. 3.Request a response from the manager."

When it comes to dwelling in a country where we use a foreign language in place of our mother tongue, many people opine that this can be the cause for problems in terms of social and practical challenges. From my perspective, I fully agree this opinion.

Instead of revealing the truth, the mass media very often misguides people. What are the reasons behind this and the visible effects on the society at large?