Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include -Why you bought it -What you liked and disliked about it -Suggestions for improvement

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Dear

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John Felliche, I am writing

this

letter to share my reviews on the recent edition of the 'The Revolution of AI' that I purchased on Amazon. Being passionate about technology, I always seek out

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reading material to stay updated with the latest news and new technological inventions and enhancements. The magazine's content was truly exceptional, providing valuable insights into the world of Artificial Intelligence. What particularly impressed me was the use of high-definition pictures throughout the publication.

However

, I find the interactive content to be lacking, which affected my

overall

experience. I would suggest introducing a section with quizzes and games related to AI, which would greatly enhance readers' engagement and make the magazine more enjoyable. I hope you consider

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future editions. Yours faithfully, SS

Submitted by Sneha s on Sat Jul 15 2023

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8 paragraphs

135 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include -Why you bought it -What you liked and disliked about it -Suggestions for improvement

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today People have unhealthy diets and do not exercise. What do you think why it is. What are the reasons? suggest some solution for solving this situation.

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

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