The he table and charts below give nformation on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. I'he table shows where the money came From and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main Features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The he table and charts below give

 nformation on the police budget for

 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.

 I'he table shows where the money came

 From and the charts show how it was

 distributed.

 Summarise the information by

 selecting and reporting the main

 Features, and make comparisons where

 relevant.
Some information is provided in a table for the
sources
of the
budget
police in one area of Britain in 2017 and 2018. The chart
also
illustrates what was
this
money used for. A glance at the table reveals that all three
sources
which are national government, local taxes and other
sources
(e.g. grants),had an increase in the
budget
in the
year
2018. Which national government owes the most the total of 318.6m with 177.8m and local taxes and other
sources
(e.g. grants) with 102.3m and 38.5m respectively. It is
while
these records were the same in ranking with 175.5m for the national government and 91.2m and 38m for two others respectively in the
year
2017 which made its total
budget
304.7m. The expenditure
on the other hand
, contains salaries (officers and staff), technology, and buildings and transport, which the first mentioned experienced a decrease of six% from 75% to 69% and the second one increased by 6% from 8% to 14% in the
year
2018. The percentage of the
last
distribution
inresulted
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resulted
in resulted
insulted
the same
for
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at
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70% in both years. On the whole, it is evident that as the
budget
of the police
arose
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rose
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in the
year
2018 the expenditure level of technology got increased as salaries went down and building and transport use the same old money.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, budget, year, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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