Some children spend hours every day on thier smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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era, teenagers prefer to use cell phones throughout the day. In the following paragraphs, I would like to shed light on the reasons for

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from my perspective it has more drawbacks than benefits. The first and foremost cause is that youngsters have become addicted to the utilisation of phones for various purposes.

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, the majority of the time, they like to study by watching or reading articles or videos on the internet since they find it a more convenient way to study.

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, they spend their whole day playing video games, and even if their parents restrict them, they would not follow their guidance.

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, it has a huge impact on their studies as well.

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, they keep on scrolling through various social sites or communicating with their companions as they

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it far more interesting rather than studying.

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, parents and teachers frequently complain that innovations in technology have a considerable effect on the nature, studies and health of young ones. Undoubtedly, I feel it is a negative development as the use of any technical device more than required definitely affects users.

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with, long screening hours result in weak eyesight, sometimes, leading to serious eye problems.

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, these days, the majority of youngsters have to wear concave and convex lenses, despite the fact that they are too young for them.

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, when kids keep playing video games or become couch potatoes

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using social sites,

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, they

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not have any time to perform physical activities.

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, they would become obese at an early age, in fact, they might have to suffer from diseases

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being overweight. In conclusion, these days,

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use cell phones as a mode of entertainment,

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addiction does not let them do other important activities.

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, it has affected their physical, social and mental well-being.