In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Nowadays, traffic congestion is a huge problem and governments try to take action to find a solution. One of them is developing public

transportation

system with funds which come from the taxes of individual car owners.

This

solution may bring about numerous

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advantages and disadvantages. In

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century, many huge and cosmopolitan cities have

magnificent

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the magnificent

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infrastructure of

transportation

such

as

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London, Berlin, Italy, and Istanbul to either save our planet or

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easily.

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,

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of public

transportation

helps reduce air pollution in the world.

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, private cars bring out carbon dioxide

emmission

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emissions

emission

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air

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.

Therefore

, the number of exclusive car owners should be dropped in order to save our environment and, to solve the issue of traffic

jam

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On the other hand

, all people who live in the world are not healthy and, they have no choice

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take by bus or train.

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, disabled people and

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citizens who suffer from dreadful diseases need to drive their own cars.

Additionally

, these kinds of medical conditions call for costly treatments. For that reason, getting high taxes to improve

transportation

could be not acceptable. The governments should take action to figure

this

problem out. In conclusion, there are quantities of

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advantages and disadvantages.

However

, the main beneficial factor might be increasing air quality with the idea of having

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good quality

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transportation

.

In contrast

,

this

solution accounts for

inequilty

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inequality

inequity

among the citizens. I hope the governments will put forward an idea to fix all problems about unfairly taxing

then

,

then

will be able to improve

transportation

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the transportation

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system.