The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportions of how three different categories of individuals spend on fuel in the United Kingdom and America.
Overall
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it is evident that the poorest spend the least on petrol in the United Kingdom
while
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in the United States, they spend the highest. In reversal, the richest in the USA spend the least on gas yet more money is used by the wealthy individual in Uk. As we can see, poor people in the USA use almost 4% of their income on gas
in contrast
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to the UK where they use about 0.5% of their revenue on petrol.
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, approximately 2.5% of well-to-do
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income is used to purchase petrol in the United States of America and marginally over 3% of revenue is utilized to buy gas in the United Kingdom. In terms of middle-income earners, both nations nearly
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money
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between 3% to 5%
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