The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers
The bar graphs illustrate a bus business’s goal and reality in punctuality and how many criticisms from passengers over a period of 5 years from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that except for 2003, the record for target was higher than actual and also
in 2003, the business achieved most complaints.
In detail, the goals for punctuality in 1999 and 2000 and between 2001 and 2002 were equal, with a difference of 1 percent
, at 86 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and 85 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the firm continued to lower its goal to 84.5 percent
in 2003. The percentage for actual punctuality of the company fluctuated throughout the survey. It began at 85 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the beginning Change the spelling
per cent
then
had a dramatic decrease to 82 percent
. In the next 3 years, the data oscillated from 84 Change the spelling
per cent
units
to 84.9 units
. Fortunately, in 2003, the company pulled down the target so the figure for actual could be higher than that of the target.
It is also
worth mentioning that in 1999, the company just received 70 complaints. In the following year, this
figure raised about 30 units
and followed by 85 units
in 2001. The last
2 years of the survey contributed the most to the number of complaints sent to the firm, at 110 and 120, in that order.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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