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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. •Say where you think you left the papers •Explain why they are so important • Tell the manager what you want him /her to

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am John Smith. I am writing
this
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 letter to draw your attention to
loss
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the loss
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 of important documents in your hotel. To commence with,
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, I want to tell you that I visited your hotel regarding my Company's meeting on 10th July. We provide room for the preparation of our presentation.
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, I have to let you know that I forgot some important papers in your hotel. Perhaps it is in your room
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 if you do not find
in
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it in
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 the room maybe it's in the meeting hall. I request you that kindly ask your staff
for
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 search my documents.It is very important for me because It is
contract
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a contract
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 paper which I need in future to work with
other
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another
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 company.
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, I am glad if you find
this
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 and send me by courier or Fex.
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, if you don't find please let me know as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, John Smith.
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