You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. •Say where you think you left the papers •Explain why they are so important •Tell the manager what you want him /her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention that I attend my

Company

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's Meeting at your

hotel

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and after came back home I figured out that I forgot my important

documents

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in your

hotel

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. I would like to tell you that my meeting was on 10th July in your

hotel

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and our

company

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provides

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a separate

room

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.My

room

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number was B2-205.I heartily request that could you tell your

hotel

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staff to check

this

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room

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.I thought that I forgot it in the locker in your

room

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.My all

documents

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are in

white

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envelope. These

documents

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are extremely important for me since in

this

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envelope there

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some contract papers

as well as

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some

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work

documents

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This

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is very crucial for my

company

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if I do not give these

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to my

company

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then

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it is very a huge loss for me and my

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, I thought that we faced too many circumstances. I hope you understand my matter and send me my

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by courier. I willingly pay charges for

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. I am waiting for your positive answer and I hope you take action against it as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, John Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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