The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph displays how many tourists visited a certain Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the
island
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's total visitor count rose steadily almost every year over the past seven years. Starting in 2016, more visitors stayed on cruise ships than on the
island
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; before that, the reverse was true.The total
number
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of arrivals on the
island
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went up gradually from 1
million
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in 2010 to roughly 2.75
million
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in 2015. It
then
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stayed at
this
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level in 2016 until it rocketed to 3.5
million
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in 2017. The
number
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of visitors who stayed on the
island
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stood at about 0.75
million
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in 2010 and 2011. It
then
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increased consistently before reaching a plateau of 1.5
million
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, which lasted from 2013 to 2017 except for a small dip in 2016. There were far fewer tourists staying on cruise ships in 2010, at only around 0.25
million
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. After some fluctuations over the following 2 years, the
number
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started climbing steadily, overtaking the
number
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of those staying on the
island
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in 2016 and reaching 2
million
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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