Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems , as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
An individual
whose
Correct pronoun usage
who
expecting
to live in a Wrong verb form
expects
country
, where foreign
Add an article
a foreign
the foreign
language
is compulsory to speak can cause
tremendous obstacles in
Change preposition
on
social
Correct article usage
the social
as well as
practical side. According to
me , I think immigrant
would definitely face Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
this
problem. Let’s dig into some of the problems
in further
paragraphs.
Generally speaking , if a person
doesn’t
know the country
mother Change noun form
country's
language
, firstly
he faces social problems
. Furthermore
, it can create a
trouble for another Correct article usage
apply
person
. For instance
, if an individual from malaisiya
Change the capitalization
Malaisiya
migrate
to Australia , where only Correct subject-verb agreement
migrates
foreign
Correct article usage
a foreign
language
will be spoken. But he or she only knows her mother language
which is ‘malay
’. He or she would face Change the capitalization
Malay
this
language
barrier
,
when communicating with the neighbours. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, for any emergency or to get to know each other be a barrier
between them. In common , when they go for
shopping Change preposition
apply
to
a market. They Change preposition
at
doesn’t
know what is written in that product or ask Change the verb form
don’t
details
of the product , he or she Change preposition
for details
doesn’t
know to communicate. Undoubtedly, language
Add an article
the language
a language
barrier
can be a huge impact for
a human.
Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, that individual face practical problems
as well too. To begin
with , he or she face
difficulty when communicating Change the verb form
faces
to
a health problem. Change preposition
about
For example
, when that individual get
sick and go to Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
hospital
that Add an article
a hospital
the hospital
doesn’t
know to tell their problems
, it will cause
to
another serious issue. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, that person
would face culture shock since they left their loved ones. When any local dwellers invites
to a party. That Change the verb form
invite
person
visits there but he or she doesn’t
know the culture and it might feel offend
to that Replace the word
offensive
person
.
In conclusion, living in a country
, where you have to speak foreign
Add an article
a foreign
language
can cause
language
Correct article usage
a language
barrier
to any individual, however
, if he or she doesn’t
know that country
mother Change noun form
country's
language
it cause
that Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
person
a huge complication in their life. Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
notion.Submitted by zahraasmi2001 on
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