Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems , as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An individual
whose
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expecting
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expects
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to live in a
country
, where
foreign
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a foreign
the foreign
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language
is compulsory to speak can
cause
tremendous obstacles
in
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on
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social
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the social
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as well as
practical side.
According to
me , I think
immigrant
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immigrants
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would definitely face
this
problem. Let’s dig into some of the
problems
in
further
paragraphs. Generally speaking , if a
person
doesn’t
know the
country
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country's
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mother
language
,
firstly
he faces social
problems
.
Furthermore
, it can create
a
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trouble for another
person
.
For instance
, if an individual from
malaisiya
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migrate
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migrates
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to Australia , where only
foreign
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a foreign
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language
will be spoken. But he or she only knows her mother
language
which is ‘
malay
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Malay
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’. He or she would face
this
language
barrier
,
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when communicating with the neighbours.
In addition
, for any emergency or to get to know each other be a
barrier
between them. In common , when they go
for
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shopping
to
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at
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a market. They
doesn’t
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don’t
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know what is written in that product or ask
details
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for details
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of the product , he or she
doesn’t
know to communicate. Undoubtedly,
language
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the language
a language
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barrier
can be a huge impact
for
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on
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a human.
On the other hand
, that individual face practical
problems
as well too.
To begin
with , he or she
face
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difficulty when communicating
to
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about
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a health problem.
For example
, when that individual
get
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gets
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sick and go to
hospital
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a hospital
the hospital
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that
doesn’t
know to tell their
problems
, it will
cause
to
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apply
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another serious issue.
Secondly
, that
person
would face culture shock since they left their loved ones. When any local dwellers
invites
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invite
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to a party. That
person
visits there but he or she
doesn’t
know the culture and it might feel
offend
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offensive
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to that
person
. In conclusion, living in a
country
, where you have to speak
foreign
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a foreign
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language
can
cause
language
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a language
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barrier
to any individual,
however
, if he or she
doesn’t
know that
country
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country's
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mother
language
it
cause
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causes
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that
person
a huge complication in their life.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
notion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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