The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
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The given line graph demonstrates the frequency of buying and eating fast food products by juveniles in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
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, figures for purchased pizza and hamburgers showed sharp growth and entered the plateau by the end of the period, outracing sales of fish and chips that experienced a rapid decrease after a short rise and took the
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position in the rating. The growth temps of Italian and American dishes were similar. So, in 1975 their sales were not more than 15 per year (approximately 7 and 10 respectively).
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, in the next 20
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they showed a stable and pretty dramatic rise without fluctuations.
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, pizza had an average of around 82 buyers /year,
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burgers attract exactly 100 clients for the same period in 1995.
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, after the sharp increase both dishes entered the plateau and numbers remained unchanged by the end of the estimation. At the same time, fish and chips were obviously the leader in 1975, but showed a downward tendency and fell from exactly a hundred selling to around 85. Numbers slightly grew in the next 10 years reaching nearly 90 sales in 1985. Later, the popularity of
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type of food considerably dropped and attracted not more than 40 clients by the end of the evaluated term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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