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We always say that there is a generation gap and there always will be. What causes generation gap? Is there no way to strike a balance in the relations between two generations?

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In
this
 constantly evolving technological era, there has always been a
generation
gap
 and there are numerous reasons behind
this
gap
. Meanwhile,
this
gap
 can be balanced. Both ideas,
along with
 the conclusion
at the end
, would be perused in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are a plethora of causes behind a
generation
gap
 and the foremost reason is constantly evolving
technology
, which is making it hard for
people
 to cover the
generation
gap
 as throughout the globe various new advancements are taking place that are changing the way the masses work at professional
as well as
 personal level. To cite an example, in India, the elderly who are more than 60 years find it difficult to use automobiles and operate computers because 50 years ago, the
technology
 was not developed completely.
Moreover
, in the countryside areas, they even do not know how to operate mobile phones.
Consequently
,
technology
 is developing at a rapid rate, which makes it difficult for old
people
 to keep themselves up-to-date with the latest in the industry.
Nevertheless
, the
generation
 can be covered and balanced by implementing various methods and techniques. The most the dominant way is to run awareness campaigns at public
places
 so that older
people
 who visit these
places
 can be aware of the latest in
technology
. For
this
, the higher authorities should come forward.
For example
, most of the senior citizens visit different public
places
 like gardens, public libraries, and more; when awareness campaigns would be run at
such
places
, the old
people
 will become to know how to operate cars and use laptops. In a nutshell,
although
 the
generation
gap
 is quite long to cover and balance, it can be reduced if all individuals and the legislation take an expedient step to grasp the nettle of
this
 problem.
Moreover
, the youngsters should assist their grandparents to cover the
gap
 by teaching them how to use automobiles and other things.
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