in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is believed that in the future purchases
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books
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and newspapers will decline since everything
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want to read about is available on the Internet. Personally, I would share
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point of view In today’s digital
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,
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can find online, whatever they want. Online shops, news, games,
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are becoming more common in modern society
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even elderly
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use them. Everyone, now,has devices , which are extremely convenient for reading both
books
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and news. So, only old-fashioned
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, today, buy newspapers or
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books
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,
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recent statistics, 70% of book lovers use e-
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and read via them.
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will completely replace
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books
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, as far newspapers and
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are now becoming less popular among
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, it will not be a profitable business to sell them.
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give their preference to digital texts for different reasons.
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, they do not require any payments, and
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aspect is very attractive to readers.
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.
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as she/he does not spend money to get to a particular shop.
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can read
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or news via their phone whenever and wherever they wish as it does not require special lighting.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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