In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Today in some countries it is very essential for
people
to have their own house
rather than living
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live
a rented apartments
. There can be different reasons why Correct the article-noun agreement
a rented apartment
rented apartments
people
prefer it but personally, I do believe that it is better for people
.
Supporters of this
idea usually say that every person should have guaranteed
roof over Correct article usage
a guaranteed
a
head, a home, which will always welcome its master and will not Change the word
their
requite
any payments for it. They are convinced that it is extremely important to own a Correct your spelling
require
house
by
their middle ages, Change preposition
in
also
. It is impossible to live in a renting
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rented
house
at the ages of 70-80, they believe. For example
, people
especially 40-50 aged ones, in Kazakhstan support this
point of view because it is a convention in their culture. Centuries ago youngsters of Kazakh
Khanate had had Correct article usage
the Kazakh
aim
of constructing their own Add an article
the aim
house
, which is named as
a “Yurt” for their future families. And today Change preposition
apply
this
tradition is still exists
, with houses, changed only
As a citizen of Change the verb form
still exists
country
where it is a convention to buy own houses, I agree that it is a positive development. Add an article
the country
a country
Firstly
, everyone has to think about his/her future. Renters might be evicted from house
at any time, so they will not have a place to go. Add an article
the house
a house
Therefore
it is not really safe to rent accommodations. Furthermore
, it is cheaper to live in house
which owns Add an article
a house
the house
to
a person rather than pay monthly to someone who cannot even guarantee safety. Change preposition
by
Moreover
, youngsters of
these countries will be more independent if they will have a name to buy Change preposition
in
own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
house
. They will be responsible for their house
and everything that it requires, such
as paying taxes, for instance
.
In conclusion, different countries may have different occasions, undiscussed
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and undiscussed
question
, like in Kazakhstan’s example. And I feel that there is nothing negative in Fix the agreement mistake
questions
such
instances.Submitted by madinatagybergen6 on
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