Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
cyber era, society tends to be more creative in terms of selling goods, which can be seen from a concrete example, advertisements
. The commercial display has brought massive success in convincing people
to shop for items. On the other hand
, because of its common use
, some people
argue that commercial broadcasts are no longer unique. However
, I disagree that advertisements
no longer attract people
. In this
following essay, I will elaborate on the extent to which I agree that advertisements
still attract individuals to buy things and provide some examples.
The commercial publication has been used for many years in order to levitate the rate of sales, as it promotes and persuades people
to buy items. There are many forms of advertisements
, for example
, billboards, flyers, or video motion on television or website. Marketing companies have their own unique ways to promote their sales, aiming their market target, and constructing their advertisement concept. Marketers use
models, various colours and unique places to produce a certain characteristic of publicity. Because of this
reason, I believe using advertisements
as a way to boost sales is a creative idea.
However
, people
may seem bored with two-dimensional space advertisements
. Hence
, these days, companies tend to use
three-dimensional space commercial displays. This
can be seen, for example
, Maybelline a cosmetic companies, use
fake lashes at the top of a bus and a train in London and complete with the brushes, to promote their mascara products. As a result
, people
are attracted to their promotion and the number of their mascara production increased.
In conclusion, advertisements
have an effective way to escalate the sale rate. However
, advertisers have to be more creative in terms of conceptualizing and producing unique and appealing advertisements
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite