In some cities, there is less control over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings. People can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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What is the advantage and disadvantages of controlling design and construction?
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buildings and homes that have
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strict safety codes and more organized streets. The conclusion is that there
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to be laws that can
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