The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
The bar chart provides information about a few changes in the
percentage
of
people
who were born in
Australia
and who were born outside
Australia
living in urban, rural, and town from 1995 to 2010
overall
,
people
who were born in
Australia
in
cities
,
towns
, and rural
areas
showed a downward trend throughout the period, and
also
people
who were born outside in
cities
,
towns
, and rural
areas
showed a downward in the
last
time. in 1995,
people
who were born in
Australia
specifically in
cities
had more newborns than in
towns
and rural
areas
, the
percentage
of birth in
cities
is 50%,
while
in
towns
the rate is almost 20%, and in rural area rate is 30%. In the same year,
people
who were born outside
Australia
and living in
cities
also
had more newborns and their
percentage
is 60%,
although
in
towns
the rate is almost 15%, and in rural
areas
is 40%. In 2010, the
percentage
decreased very much, whether they were born inside or outside
Australia
, except in
cities
it didn't decrease. For those who were born in
Australia
in
cities
, their
percentage
is 80%, at the same time
people
who were born in
towns
and rural area in
Australia
their rates was the same which was 17%, and for those who were born in
towns
and rural
areas
outside
Australia
were not uniform, as in town the
percentage
was 13% and the rural area was 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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