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The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
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The bar chart provides information about a few changes in the
percentage
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 of
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 and who were born outside
Australia
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 living in urban, rural, and town from 1995 to 2010
overall
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,
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 in
cities
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,
towns
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, and rural
areas
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 showed a downward trend throughout the period, and
also
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people
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 who were born outside in
cities
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,
towns
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, and rural
areas
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 showed a downward in the
last
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 time. in 1995,
people
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 who were born in
Australia
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 specifically in
cities
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 had more newborns than in
towns
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 and rural
areas
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, the
percentage
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 of birth in
cities
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 is 50%,
while
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 in
towns
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 the rate is almost 20%, and in rural area rate is 30%. In the same year,
people
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 who were born outside
Australia
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 and living in
cities
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also
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 had more newborns and their
percentage
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 is 60%,
although
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 in
towns
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 the rate is almost 15%, and in rural
areas
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 is 40%. In 2010, the
percentage
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 decreased very much, whether they were born inside or outside
Australia
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, except in
cities
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 it didn't decrease. For those who were born in
Australia
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 in
cities
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, their
percentage
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 is 80%, at the same time
people
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 who were born in
towns
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 and rural area in
Australia
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 their rates was the same which was 17%, and for those who were born in
towns
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 and rural
areas
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 outside
Australia
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 were not uniform, as in town the
percentage
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 was 13% and the rural area was 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, australia, cities, towns, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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