The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
The bar chart provides information about a few changes in the
percentage
of people
who were born in Australia
and who were born outside Australia
living in urban, rural, and town from 1995 to 2010
overall
, people
who were born in Australia
in cities
, towns
, and rural areas
showed a downward trend throughout the period, and also
people
who were born outside in cities
, towns
, and rural areas
showed a downward in the last
time.
in 1995, people
who were born in Australia
specifically in cities
had more newborns than in towns
and rural areas
, the percentage
of birth in cities
is 50%, while
in towns
the rate is almost 20%, and in rural area rate is 30%.
In the same year, people
who were born outside Australia
and living in cities
also
had more newborns and their percentage
is 60%, although
in towns
the rate is almost 15%, and in rural areas
is 40%.
In 2010, the percentage
decreased very much, whether they were born inside or outside Australia
, except in cities
it didn't decrease. For those who were born in Australia
in cities
, their percentage
is 80%, at the same time people
who were born in towns
and rural area in Australia
their rates was the same which was 17%, and for those who were born in towns
and rural areas
outside Australia
were not uniform, as in town the percentage
was 13% and the rural area was 10%.Submitted by shahdkandil07 on
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