You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Georgia Henry, I have been writing to you to request assistance in finding a place to stay as I have been planning to migrate to Canada.

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, I want to inform you that I am an international student, more precisely, I have received an offer letter from Humber College. There, I am going to study Mechanical Engineering Technician program for two years. To put it forth, I would be glad, if you could arrange my accommodation near to college, so that, I would not face much trouble and could preserve a few hours of travelling.

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, please provide a cheap, safe and cosy place, I have not any problem staying in a house, basement, or in a flat.

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, I would prefer to live alone,

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please make sure public transportation services need to convenient as well. Currently, I want to rent a room from the 21st of January, since I am boarding at Toronto Airport on the 15th of January and staying with family for the first few weeks. Hope to hear from you soon, and I would be happy to answer any

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, Georgia Henry.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

199 words

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