The line graph illustrates the average number of UK worker traveling by three different transport from 1970 to 2030

The line graph illustrates the average number of UK worker traveling by three different transport from 1970 to 2030
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The line graph illustrates the average
number
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of UK
worker
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workers
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traveling
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travelling
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by three different transport from 1970 to 2030
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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cars were by far the most popular mode of transportation for most of the 60-year period. And the
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of bus users is decreasing. On the one hand,in 1970,about 5
million
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UK commuters used cars to get to work every day,
while
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the
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of workers choosing trains and buses was less than 3
million
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and around 4
million
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. By 2000,drivers increase sharply to 6
million
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. Train passengers
also
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increased slightly by 3
million
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.
Conversely
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, the
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of workers taking the bus gradually decreased by approximately 0.5
million
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.
On the other hand
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,by 2030, the
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of people commuting by car is expected to rapidly increase to 9
million
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. About 6
million
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passengers are expected to use the train.
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, there was a continuous decline in the
number
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of passengers choosing buses under 3
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrates
  • average number
  • traveling
  • transportation
  • period
  • analyzed
  • trends
  • significant
  • increases
  • decreases
  • peaked
  • examination
  • growth
  • decline
  • factors
  • contributed
  • noticeable
  • increase
  • decrease
  • speculating
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • usage
  • shifts
  • preference
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • conclusion
  • summarizing
  • findings
  • preferences
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