International community should act immediately to encourage countries to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Indeed, some people

suggests

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that international organisations should give

strongly

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advocations in

change

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the consumption habits of fossil

fuels

for their numbers. In my

views

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, I

am partly agree

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that the

community

platform should positively set a list of advice and rule to decline

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trend

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for traditional

energy

. For international organisations, one duty is to set a communication platform to internationally

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one particular event when it will

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a toll on

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global,

for

example

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decrease

environment

pollutions

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and

improve

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sustainably

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economic development.

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, reduced demand

of

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traditional nature

fuels

are

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also

a

directly

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action to protect

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for international organisations. The reason is that these kinds of

energy

will

produced

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too

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and exceed the prediction

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human

was

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.

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, the negative influence

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environment

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includes too much carbon dioxide and other different materials

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discharged, and that will affect the multiple changes of climate and bad health conditions for human

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.

As a result

, the international

community

should encourage their numbers to reduce the need

of

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traditional

fuels

.

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,

the

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economic problems will be caused if

international

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community

merely advocate

change

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energy

resources that their numbers used to

ultilise

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energy

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utilize

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structure, it is

also

extinct a gap in how to use

fuels

between

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old and new. For some particular industry

field

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, it can be a better choice to consume nature resources, caused they have some features in clearer and healthier for the

environment

,

such

as electricity cars.

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others point out that it must be taken bad impact on the efficiency of

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manufacture

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process, leading to fewer profits will be acquired by workers and factories. In summary, I

am partly agree

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that

international

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community

should take certain suggestions about the

change

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habit of

fuels

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consumption,

due to

its a responsibility for these kinds of

organisation

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to protect the whole world and human beings.

While

these organizations

also

should

combination

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internationally and together to solve the critical

environment

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problem.