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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. therefore physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all schools. what do you think.

#exercise #children #teenagers #education #sports #students #schools
In recent years,whether in all schools should be compulsory for all
students
 who study physical
education
 and
sports
 or not has caused
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controversy.
although
this
 trend is
nost
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not
 without disadvantages will be far
over
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shadow. On the one hand, making physical
education
 and
sports
 compulsory for all
students
 in all
school
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 has several reasons.
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 restrict, the
students
 participate in these activities to deal with the lessons and school. Because they do not really care about it.
second,
the
amount
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 of
students
spend
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 their time
on
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studying.
this
 means that they
really
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 into their homework than these activities.
On the other hand
,
i
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 believe that it is more beneficial for outdoor activities like
sports
 or physical
education
help
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 us have a healthy lifestyle. in fact, if you tend to play professional a sport, you must follow a healthy diet and stop eating fast food. so physical
education
 is the best way to help
students
who
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avoid health problems related to sugarcane or obesity.
second,
the lesson about
sports
also
teach
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 us the discipline and responsibilities.
this
 means that
,
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 these subjects have related to the fields of practising
the
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patiention
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patient
attention
 and discipline.
for example
,
according to
report
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 in
america
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, 2010,
the
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children and teenagers play
sports
 which be higher patient and
discipline
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tha
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than
the
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people
do
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 not play. In conclusion, with the convincing
the
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argument above should
be make
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 compulsory
sports
 in
the
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schools. by considering all pros and cons.
i
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 think the
goverment
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government
 will make
the
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good decisions to solve
this
 problem.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical health
  • mental well-being
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • muscular strength
  • coordination
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • lifelong habit
  • academic performance
  • concentration
  • childhood obesity
  • active lifestyle
  • compulsory
  • equal opportunities
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