The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates several steps of how the production of instant noodles is carried out in the factory.
It is clear that
there are 8 main stages in Linking Words
this
process, beginning with flour being stored in the silos and ending with the resulting products being labelling and sealing.
As can be seen, during the first step, flour is taken from the storage silos to the factory for being mixed with water and oil in a mixer. Linking Words
Next,
the mixture is conveyed through the rollers so that it becomes flat dough sheets before undergoing another process to be cut into dough strips.
Once cut, they are collected to form discs before being cooked in oil in a frying machine and let dry carefully. Linking Words
Subsequently
, the noodles, Linking Words
as well as
some dried vegetables Linking Words
together with
spices are put in cups which Linking Words
then
are transferred to the labelling and sealing procedure. Here, all the products are Linking Words
finally
attached with labels and sealed with plastic covers.Linking Words
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