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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information on different types of species practised for animal testing in the U.S.
Overall
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, Rabbits and Hamsters were the top most experimented animals compared to the least tested species the Sheep. The Rabbits contributed the highest for animal testing which resulted in 38.7%
however
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, the second animal was the Hamster which was relatively less than 30%. Apart from all these, there is one more animal which is used by the U.S. animal tester and the third most highly used species is the Dogs which crossed approximately more than 10%.
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, the three least experimented animals are the Pigs, the Primates, and the Sheep which were below 9.5%. Apart from all of that, these animals didn't even contribute even a quarter.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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