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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows a comparison of
London
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 and
Sydney
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 temperatures regarding the sunset and sunrise time
as well as
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 the sunlight duration at a weekend of the
last
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 month in 2018.
Overall
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, at
this
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 weekend in December 2018, the climate of
Sydney
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 sees a higher level of
temperature
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 than in
London
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.
In addition
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, in
Sydney
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, the
temperature
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 for the consecutive three days are relatively stable,
whereas
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 in
London
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 it has a slight fluctuation during the same period. It can be seen that the
temperature
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 in
London
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 varied considerably from the lowest 3
degrees
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 to the highest 13
degrees
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, with a gap of 10
degrees
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. Meanwhile, the
temperature
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 in
Sydney
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 is twice as high as that in
London
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, with the highest and the lowest
temperature
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 separately 31
degrees
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 and 17
degrees
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. On top of that, the daylight continues in
London
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 approximately from nearly 8 am to 4 pm, with the day span being about 8 hours.
While
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 the day in
Sydney
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 starts before 6 am and ends after 8 pm, with the daylight lasting for 20 hours, which is more than twice as long as that in
London
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 at the same period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, temperature, degrees with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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