The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map
show
Change the verb form
shows
two
possible sites Use synonyms
two
build a new supermarket. Use synonyms
According to
the map, the Linking Words
town
is mainly covered by Use synonyms
housing
area, and at the Correct article usage
a housing
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
, there is Use synonyms
a
no traffic zone. There are Correct article usage
apply
two
industry areas in the Use synonyms
town
.
For the first one, S1, it is located Use synonyms
at
the countryside, away from the Change preposition
in
town
centre. S1 is nearby the railway, and it is only 12 km to travel from S1 to another Use synonyms
town
which is called Hinton.
On the other side, S2 is located Use synonyms
at
the south of Garlsdon, which is in the Change preposition
in
town
centre. Not only is S2 close to the Use synonyms
raiway
, but it Correct your spelling
railway
also
has a shorter distance to most of the housing area than S1.
From S2, people can go to Linking Words
two
different places, Use synonyms
although
they are both far from Linking Words
Use synonyms
town
centre, S2 still can have an opportunity to make money from three different towns.Add an article
the town
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