In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates prblems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outwegh the disadvantages?
It is argued that getting involved in an adventure activity in either their profession or their personal lives would be considered to be meaningful and proud behaviour.
While
I understand that everyone has a passion for taking risks, I do believe that the practice has more drawbacks than its benefits.
On the one hand, there are many limitations that taking risks can bring. Linking Words
To begin
with, for businessmen, it is easier to fail and go into bankruptcy Linking Words
due to
their blind investment. some brace investors put all their properties on loan for their own ambitions, which is likely to bring about a huge crisis. Linking Words
Moreover
, people who do extreme sports may get injured if they do not make sufficient preparations. Linking Words
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such
circumstances, they would suffer from financial bankruptcy or physical disability, and fall into hell ultimately. What's more, their devotion may be carried out without sufficient evaluation, which increases the possibility of failure.
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On the other hand
, it is beneficial to take risks. Linking Words
Firstly
, these investors can earn plenty of money through risky investments. some successful businessmen like the founder of Alibaba, Jack Ma, have reaped the benefits of taking adventures. Linking Words
Furthermore
, these behaviours not only enhance their bravery but Linking Words
also
broaden their horizons once they succeed. Linking Words
Lastly
, these activities can cultivate their anti-stress ability so that they are able to recover after being defeated.
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to conclude
that taking risky activities is a double-edged sword. So we should beware of the opportunities and excitement it brings to us, but should not ignore the dangers behind leisure.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly states your position and previews the main points of your essay. Additionally, provide a clear conclusion that summarizes your main ideas and restates your position.
task response
Your essay contains relevant points and examples, but be sure to address all aspects of the task prompt, including both advantages and disadvantages of having an aging population. Additionally, ensure that your stance is clear throughout the essay.