You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my frustration with the meal with my family on Sunday night. I am a regular customer of the restaurant and reserved a table a day in advance because it was my mother's birthday. There were some issues at the party.

Firstly

we don't have the sitting position I want. I was really disappointed about

this

. It made us not comfortable, and we had to and the party earlier than planned. There were a few problems in your restaurant. I hope I will come here again and get a positive change.

your

Correct the word

yours

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faithfully

Mr.

Change the punctuation

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Thong

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

105 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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