The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the man-made process which depicts manufacturing instant
noodles
Overall
, this
8-step linear process begins from storage silos, is followed dough
Change preposition
by dough
sheets
and strips and ends with labelling and sealing cups
As diagram
represents, the first step in manufacturing Correct article usage
the diagram
noodles
is to deliver flour to storage silos, where it will stay for a particular period. After, flour is directed to mixer
, where it is mixed with water and oil and scrolled by rollers, Add an article
the mixer
a mixer
then
. The following step is
to produce dough
sheets
, which made
by rollers. The fourth stage is making Add a missing verb
are made
dough
strips from sheets
, this
is made by dividing those sheets
into several lines.
Next
part of the process starts with making Correct article usage
The next
noodles
discs from dough
strips. Then
, these discs are cooked in oil and are dryed
, afterwards. The following step, after drawing is adding vegetables and spices. Correct your spelling
dried
Also
, cups must be produced, in order to put prepared noodles
into them. The final stage is creating labels and labelling+sealing cups with noodles
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