The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the man-made process which depicts manufacturing instant

noodles

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this

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8-step linear process begins from storage silos, is followed

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dough

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by dough

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sheets

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and strips and ends with labelling and sealing cups As

diagram

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the diagram

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represents, the first step in manufacturing

noodles

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is to deliver flour to storage silos, where it will stay for a particular period. After, flour is directed to

mixer

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the mixer

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, where it is mixed with water and oil and scrolled by rollers,

then

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The following step is

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to produce

dough

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sheets

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, which

made

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are made

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by rollers. The fourth stage is making

dough

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strips from

sheets

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this

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is made by dividing those

sheets

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into several lines.

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The next

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part of the process starts with making

noodles

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discs from

dough

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strips.

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, these discs are cooked in oil and are

dryed

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dried

, afterwards. The following step, after drawing is adding vegetables and spices.

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, cups must be produced, in order to put prepared

noodles

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into them. The final stage is creating labels and labelling+sealing cups with

noodles

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, dough, sheets with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Manufacturing process
Noodle dough
Steaming
Cutting
Dough sheeting
Molding
Air-drying
Frying
Seasoning
Quality control
Packaging
Shelf life
Flavoring agents
Texture
Instant meal
Convenience food
Production line
Consumer
Ingredient mixing
Safety standards

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE IMMIGRATING TO DEVELOPED WORLD. DISCUSS ITS REASONS AND STATE ITS CONSEQUENCES

Television is dangerous because it destroy family life and sense of community; arrested of visiting people or talking with our family we just watched television

Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?