Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, advertising is becoming a controversial topic. Some
people
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believe that it is
successful
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a successful
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way of attracting
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clients
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other individuals completely oppose
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idea. Supporters of advertising usually say that if
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are everywhere, on each and every platform,
people
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do not have a choice but to buy a product. Actually, from some aspects,
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is true,
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, only as long as
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are very attractive in fact.
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, they become just annoying for
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and even,
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might appear a risk of losing clients. So if companies attract
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in a creative way,
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possibly can buy a certain product. As far today, advertising is an extremely common thing,
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people
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and people
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, which are responsible for marketing, should be extremely creative, as well. In
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way, it is possible to persuade
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to buy products.
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, those who disagree with advertising’s success say that
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are very annoying these days. Basically, it is useless to refuse
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fact as it is noticeable how many
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are on
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the streets
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or on the Internet now. So,
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got used to
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it everywhere and do not pay attention,
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.
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, when
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the popular
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app, YouTube added
advertisements
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in each video,
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a number
the number
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of YouTube users rapidly decreased.
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example shows that
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are dissatisfied with
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the amount
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of
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they watch on a daily basis. But as it is everywhere,
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are forced to watch it.
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, everything
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need, they can find on the Internet. In conclusion, both points of view have benefits, definitely.
Although
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, I would agree with
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the opposers
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because today,
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the amount
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of data on the Internet is enormous, even without
advertisements
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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