The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
This
map depicts the town
centre
in its current form and the proposed expansion .It is clear from the graph that there are several changes that are planned to make .The most noticeable change is making a dual carriageway,which will be an important addition to make the access to town
centre
easier.
According to
what is shown, the main road will be demolished and become for pedestrians only which is located above the shops .Also
,more facilities will be added such
as a bus station,shopping centre
,car park and new housing added that is
situated in the northeast of the Islip town
centre
.The housing located in the centre
of town
will be moved to the southwest ,there are some places that remain the same like the school and shops .In
addition
the size of the park will be smaller than the old oneAdd a comma
,addition
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