It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?

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people

suppose that

people

in the

cities

hardly

to take

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fully

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physcial

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physical

exercise. In

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essay, I will give some reasons and suggest my solutions for

this

situation. The reason, I realize it could be a vital part of

this

issue, is

that

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the busy life in the

cities

. The average

time

of working and study of

people

in the

cities

is around 8 to 10 hours per day including working overtime and participating in some extra classes. That would directly impact

on

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times

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spending for

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doing exercise. Another reason

,

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might be the

cities

, where

people

can have more chances to approach with some

entertainments

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, which are

potential

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replacement for

pracetising

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practising

their physical health. The fact that

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a huge number of children living in the

urbans

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urban

also

choose

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stay at home and play video

game

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instead

of playing sports or many employees

who

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will prefer to go to pubs as a gathering place than training in the gym. That could create gradually some less health habits for residents.

However

, there are several steps

can

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give citizens a hand to play

exercise

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and exercise

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more regularly. The first solution is the permit from governments, companies and schools to cut the

time

of working and learning for

staffs

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and students. Might be light reduction of 1 to 2 hours make a significant change for many

people

. That would play an important role in the balance between

time

for working and

time

for themself. The second reason is propagating and launching more sports movements. Take

a

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event of BIDV as an example, the programme of running for the fund, which will volunteer for

people

who have a property live in the country. By running each kilometre,

people

can contribute 5.000 VNĐ

for

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charity

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budget.

With some

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programmes like

this

,

it

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not only

can enhanced

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their strength

,

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but

also

have

a opportunities

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for supporting

people

. In conclusion, I believe that

people

definitely can implement some solutions

are

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mentioned like reducing

total

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of

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working

time

and promoting some sports movements in order to tackle these concerns

such

as the busy life in the

cities

and temptations.